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3/1
A new dawn begins
The sun opening for war
Blood red sun's shining

3/2
Holiday's thrive now
Tis a day for mothering
Why not fathering?

3/3
The snow's beginning
To melt and show the true earth
Brown ground and green grass

3/4
Yellow sun opens
A day that ends with pouring
Water soaks the skin

3/5
Winds of March blow hard.
Gusts that even Mars won't touch.
Land of spinning air.

3/6
The heat wavers on
While warm jackets suffice now.
When will spring arrive?

3/7
The sun's glaring down,
While talks of feelings persist.
Talks instead of laughs

3/8
Rain pours down on us.
A leaky faucet. On, off.
Cannot control it.

3/9
Hours of day change.
One less hour to enjoy.
Days are now shorter.

3/10
Wind blows the frisbee,
Back and forth across the field.
Running to catch it.

3/11
Cool, yet sunny day.
Ignored after the school day.
Haven't heard from since.

3/12
Celebration of
Age. Now to be sixteen years.
Now, semi-legal.

3/13
Wind persists always.
Yet warmth from the sun heals all.
School days end early.

3/14
Birthday of great mind,
No matter how long dead and gone.
Simply a Thursday.

3/15
Beware Ides Of March.
Birthday of my cousin too.
Should he beware too?

3/16
Saw Avenue Q,
And what a great day it was.
No rain and more sun.

3/17
Green colours around.
Feeling as though I'm outside.
Though tree's are talking.

3/18
A panicky day.
Full of attacks and crying.
Shall I hide away?

3/19
Mozart rehearsal.
Oh two hour agony.
When will we escape?

3/20
Today begins Spring.
Yet the weather is so cold,
And the wind still blows.

3/21
Gathering of friends,
Where I get a wedding dress.
Just what I asked for.

3/22
Family gathers.
Celebrations for Easter,
Religious, am I?

3/23
Just another day.
PostSecret has updated.
This is one good thing.

3/24
Frisbee practice now.
End up playing in A game.
We beat Arlington.

3/25
MCAS test today.
What a huge waste of time now.
But I get some sleep.

3/26
Horrendous concert.
We sounded so atrocious.
And we have MICCA.

3/27
Last day of MCAS.
And it's Holly's birthday now.
She is now sixteen.

3/28
Typically boring.
Chemistry is always fun
Though. But math isn't.

3/29
NEC today.
Violin lesson as well.
Asian night was fun.

3/30
Second to last day
Of March. The month is almost
Finished for this year.

3/31
The dawn is setting.
The sunlight is almost out.
Showers now approach.
©2008-2009 ~justmeandmygoldfish
:iconjustmeandmygoldfish:

Author's Comments

Here's mine for the Haikuathon ^^
(btw, for people wondering what the 'war' means in the second one, it's because the French word for March is Mars, who is also the Roman god of war. So the sun opens for war)

The picture's from my computer, thanks whoever took it ^^
I just though butterflies would go well with March.

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:iconhaikukitty:
3/3 typo? Show the true earth?

Excellent beginning! :wave:

I like the play on Mars / March / war.

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:iconjustmeandmygoldfish:
Haha. Yeah, that's a typo!
Really glad you like it!!


--
"You won't be hearing from me anymore
'Cause I can't see through my tears anymore
If it takes years to be any more
Than a jellyfish
I will not tell you this"
-The Magnetic Fields
:iconformel:
3/3 great alliteration in the last line "brown ground and green grass"
lovely haikus :D

--
Alucard: I had one man tell me he was a writer.
Integra: And what did you do?
A: I killed him quickly.
I: I'm sure the art community thanked you.
A: I like to consider myself a scathing critic. Non of my subjects survive my reviews.

:D
:iconhaikukitty:
When will spring arrive, indeed.... All of these spring haikus are making me impatient.

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Look who gained +20 cool points!
:iconjustmeandmygoldfish:
Haha I know!!

--
"You won't be hearing from me anymore
'Cause I can't see through my tears anymore
If it takes years to be any more
Than a jellyfish
I will not tell you this"
-The Magnetic Fields
:iconyumeakuma:
These are so sweet. My favourite has to be 13! Wind and the sun do work that way :heart: Keep up the awesome work. :D

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Sushi -
a gathering of many
pulling a disappearing act
~Yume
:iconsilica-streak:
The tone of this is very introspective, and sincere, I think. Keep writing sincere poetry.
:iconwrite-it-out:
OOOOOH I GET IT NOW

you wrote one every day!!!!

*idiot*

that is SUCH a cool idea

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feel at your own risk
:iconjustmeandmygoldfish:
XD
You're soooo smart


--
"You won't be hearing from me anymore
'Cause I can't see through my tears anymore
If it takes years to be any more
Than a jellyfish
I will not tell you this"
-The Magnetic Fields

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